I saw
a perfect
fallen leaf
shaped like a heart,
yellow,
with jagged edges-
it’s July,
green throbbing
soul of
Summer,
and yet
there’s this
fallen
golden leaf...

I saw
a perfect
fallen leaf
shaped like a heart,
yellow,
with jagged edges-
it’s July,
green throbbing
soul of
Summer,
and yet
there’s this
fallen
golden leaf...

Thanks for that comment. When I revisited this poem, the green heart part did not sound so good, so I changed it to soul. I think that works better. Anyway, I hope Oklahoma cools down! We’re supposed to get some torrential downpours here in the the next couple of days. I hope so. It’s still green, but we need rain. Love to you!
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Thank you for sharing. For Oklahoma I changed the words to Red Hot Throbbing Heart. I hope you dont mind. Its really hot here. XO
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